Excerpt Monday

Mar 23

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Posted on March 23, 2009, in Uncategorized. Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.

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briaq | March 23, 2009 at 9:06 am

YAY!I definitely want to read more! Seriously nice piece – it made me want to know more about the characters – always a good thing

Ok, I’m off to post chapter one myself.

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:49 pm
  
  Thanks Bria. This was a scene that was fun to write, simply because most of the book is so dark.
  
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Louisa | March 23, 2009 at 11:18 am

This is a very fun idea! I’m tagging along and posting an excerpt on my blog, too.

This section is great, Mel, full of tension and little details that make the reader feel very engaged and present in the scene. I’m totally intrigued!

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:49 pm
  
  I’m glad you decided to join us. I loved reading everyone’s excerpts.
  
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Kaige | March 23, 2009 at 12:45 pm

Great excerpt, Mel. I’d definitely read more. Love those bad boys.

Mine’s up too: over here.

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:50 pm
  
  Thanks Kaige. Love the bad boys as well.
  
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Cynthia | March 23, 2009 at 1:58 pm

Mel, I really like how you’re showing the differences between J.C. and Amy with their actions/dialogue instead of telling us. You’ve got me intrigued with your characters and interested in reading more.

Okay…off to post an excerpt of my own!

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:51 pm
  
  Thanks for joining us Cynthia. It was great to see how different everyone writes.
  
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jamiebabette | March 23, 2009 at 7:00 pm

Very nice excerpt. I like the play between them and how he’s uncomfortable with the dancing. My excerpt is up if you’d like to come by.

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:52 pm
  
  Thanks Jamie. It was interesting to write because it was so different. He’s an agent. He was trained to be physical but he’s never danced and I thought that entirely too cute.
  
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anshakotyk | March 25, 2009 at 3:01 pm

I love bad boys too. Great opener. I want to know more about your characters!

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- melsmag | March 25, 2009 at 3:53 pm
  
  Thanks! Next time you’ll have join us!
  
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